Brandy Ch2 Precis

UnSpun Precis

UnSpun Precis

Chapter 2
Brandy Resa
June 30, 2008

 

1)       Warning signs of trickery

a)       Listerine commercial, woman manipulated by fear

b)       Top 100 campaigns of 20th century

2)       Warning: if it’s scary, be wary

a)       Fear is staple tactic

b)       FUD factor, Amdahl’s ibm competitor

i)         Fear, Uncertainty, Doubt

ii)       Pop-up security warnings

iii)      Trustsoft, Inc lost antitrust $1.9mil

c)       Bush’s “Day of Horror”

i)         Iraq invasion used FUD

d)       After, concluded Saddam had destroyed

i)         Congress and press should have been more wary

e)       Fear used to cover lack of evidence

3)       A story that’s “too good”

a)       Overdramatic claims

b)       Michael Barnes, “Arming America

i)         Claimed pre civil war Am. Gun ownership rare

ii)       “exposed truth”

c)       If so, no Minutemen.

i)         NRA couldn’t argue 2nd amend.

d)       Belleciles Book was too good to be true

e)       More discrepancies

f)         Reason to ?

g)       Data in service of ideology

i)         1991, The Beauty Myth, Naomi Wolf

ii)       1994 Christina Hoff Summers, critic of fem. Mvmt

4)       The dangling Comparative

a)       Larger, better, faster, better-tasting

b)       Please Mom, More Arsenic!

5)       Superlatives Swindle

a)       Most, highest, biggest in history, smallest ever

6)       Pay you Tuesday con

a)       Nigerian e-mail scams

b)       Politics get burger today

7)       Blame Game

a)       Frivolous lawsuits, Bush

b)       Pointing finger at unpop. Group

8)       Glittering Generalities

a)       Carbonated water vs. “the real thing”

b)       Support for “middle class”

Responce to summary

I like how you set up your summary. It was easy to read and deffinatly highlighted the major parts of the chapter :)

the details are there

What I'd suggest for the next summaries is to put it all into sentence format. Here's a for instance. You have this:
8) Glittering Generalities a) Carbonated water vs. “the real thing” b) Support for “middle class”
You might revise to read as this: The final warning sign is "glittering Generalities" where products such as coca-Cola, a sugared carbonated water is pedaled as "the real thing" and politicians declare support for the "middle class" without ever defining just what those things are. It could possibly be done more succinctly, but this helps get the summary ready for the essay portion of things. Bradley

Very accurate and to the

Very accurate and to the point details.

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i find it a little confusing and hard to understand

formatting

My formatting doesn't copy from Roman Numeral Outline. Please use your imagination to see the indents of the outline.

although a bit clunky

You can save your word document as html and then copy/paste that code into the window and it should work. Should being the key word. If you ever want to try html, there is both frontpage, dreamweaver or kompozer. I use kompozer because it's free and it works as well as any of them for most of what I do. You can do all the fancy formatting, click on the "source" tab or button, copy that and paste it here and it should look like you expect it, no imagining required. Bradley

much better

Thank you. No imagination necessary now :)

nicely done

Good tools make good products. What did you use? I'm guessing MS Word because it's almost incomprehensible when looking at all the markup. Bradley

tools

Thank you. Word is a great tool for creating beautiful outlines. Maybe not the best for skinny html, but I was pleased with the way the outline copied over.

fat not phat

Yes, Word, and Frontpage, plugs in a lot of extra crud. Why, I don't know, but it does. I've had to clean up some of that stuff by hand and it can take quite some time. I assume there's a good reason for it, but if you want to keep it simple, try kompozer sometime. It's a free download and works great. You can find it via google. Bradley

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