TravisW Draft
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“ It is only through literature that one can put oneself in someone else’s shoes and understand the other’s different and contradictory sides and refrain from becoming too ruthless” (118). Azar Nafisi, Reading Lolita in Tehran.
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thoughts on travis's draft
Good work referencing the author. Dont let it sound like a personal issue to you because its a informational paper. I thinkk you could work on your points and the order you present them in. I got a bit lost with keeping up with the main idea of the paper. Maybe focuse on oder and your paper will come together