staci's essay 4 draft 1/ outline
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Thesis clarification as well
Thesis clarification as well as expansion is needed.
Clarification of the Age of Propaganda quote to thesis needed.
To each of the body paragraphs, tie into the thesis, as well as include real life example of is relevance.
Explaining details such as I said in person, and expanding on topics will enhance the essay to it's beautiful completion. It's on it's way. :)