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Alexei's coments for "Entertainment Rather than Education"

The introduction is providing clear expectation of now the essay will go. You have clear thesis statement. It provides sense of interest and importance. The focus of the essay is revolving around the argument. May be add more of the opposing view. Paragraphs contain specific examples. Nice job.

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