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Perla's essay 4
Submitted by anonymous (not verified) on Mon, 06/04/2012 - 08:35
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“ It is only through literature that one can put oneself in someone else’s shoes and understand the other’s different and contradictory sides and refrain from becoming too ruthless” (118). Azar Nafisi, Reading Lolita in Tehran.
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The introduction is providing the reader an expectation of how the essay is going to progress. It is introducing the topic and providing background to issue. The introduction has clear thesis, which provides some sense of interest, but I don’t see the argument. It has the name of the book, authors’ names, and the passage from the readings.
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There are some strong points in here that help the paper flow easily as well as keep the readers interest. Nice work :)