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lalala another draft of staci's 4th essay
Submitted by anonymous (not verified) on Mon, 06/04/2012 - 18:43
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“ It is only through literature that one can put oneself in someone else’s shoes and understand the other’s different and contradictory sides and refrain from becoming too ruthless” (118). Azar Nafisi, Reading Lolita in Tehran.
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Good introduction. It provides a clear expectation of how the essay is going to progress. I see the topic, but I'm not shure about the thesis. May be use more of the background? The focus of the essay is revolving around the argument. May be add more of the opposing view. Paragraphs contain specific examples. Nice job.
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Your voice is very strong in this paper, which Brad has asked for. With your opinions backed up with details and examples it's shaping to be a nice paper. It's been very well thought out and executed in a higher education type of writing, nice.
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thank you for your thoughts... let's just hope that mr. bleck feels the same way... not holding my breath. lol