Sheppard Lee, Written by Himself Group: Question
Submitted by Anonymous on Mon, 06/11/2012 - 18:09
I wanted to know if this is what you guys are thinking of when summarizing. Sorry i wanna make sure i am doing this right. I do realize that we will be meeting tomorrow but i would like to make sure this is the way we want it.
what i did was a summary, setting and characters.
Is there anything else i should be doing?
like the plot?
Feed back please
Also nothing has been corrected grammar wise so i am sorry about that also.
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| Sheppard Lee Chapter One and Two.docx | 13.14 KB |
Sorry for not posting, I just
Sorry for not posting, I just got a little busy but I decided I wanted to do the last two chapters 7 and 8 if that's alright and I will have my work done tomorrow for class time when we meet.
From what I see your work is good! but John Jumble didn't take Sheppards property, Mr. Jones did, the man he hired to take care of his money for him. Jumble was the black slave/ best friend of Sheppard that was given to him by his father. And I edited the sentences to make it flow a little better; though I don't know how much it really improved it! Ill upload it for you to see and bring a copy tomorrow.